notes five seven five
play amongst strings on paper
the muse strums her song
flakes of snow white whirl
following the winds music
beckoning to dance
fingers gently play
a song of forgotten chords
memory recalls
a mind once restless
surrenders to the night song
harp chords bring it peace
sounds of night creatures
surround the silent listener
huddled in the dark
notes drift on the wind
my love sighs from a distance
I hear his music
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A sigh as music--a poignant image.
ReplyDeleteYes to the Music
I like the first best, for it compares a haiku to music.
ReplyDeleteAll are so vivid, my friend. Each offering a different image. This is beautiful in brilliance.
I loved them all! Each can stand alone wonderfully, but five is my favorite. :-)
ReplyDeletep.s. blogger.com obviously doesn't like word press. :-) Word verification never works using wordpress I.D., works just fine with name/url though.
The first is my favorite ... and the last one is romantic ~~ well done!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much MMT, coming from you I am honoured.
ReplyDeleteLeo, your comments made me smile, and the pleasure is all mine to participant.
ReplyDeleteCap'n, ahoy, a rememberance of summer nights that can't come soon enough! Merci, and I'll fix dat sign in thingie :)
ReplyDeleteThank you becca, I'm a romantic at heart ;)
ReplyDeleteTours des Force; the last my fave. Salute!
ReplyDeleteloved the snowflakes - great imagery. And the last verse is beautiful too. thanks for visiting my blog.
ReplyDeleteI so enjoyed this. So soft,gentle and lyrical
ReplyDeleteSalute Ron et merci !
ReplyDeleteSuzy, imagery is my friend :)
ReplyDeleteI've always found haiku lyrical Tiger, it was a great prompt. Thanks you :)
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