Monday, March 10, 2014

Return - Haiku


in springs warm sunrise
feathers glow at journey's end,
red breasted robin 


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30 comments:

  1. Spring has returned with surprises and its lovely.

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  2. a classic one ! love the metaphor of the robin !

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    1. Thank you Milan, the harbinger of spring here.

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  3. Well.. doesn't such a picture make life so beautiful..

    http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2014/03/misunderstanding-haiku.html

    RS:)

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  4. There's something wistful about that phrase "journey's end."

    Returning to the Cornfields

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    1. Wistful in that they are home and bringing warmth with them, thank heavens!

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  5. It is always a welcome sight to see the robin's return. Nice! ♥

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  6. I like the robin as a sure sign of spring's return. Nice!

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  7. Yay, spring is here!! Lovely haiku Cheryl:)

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  8. Spring brings awaited joy....nice one!

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    1. O that it does Ralle, you have no idea after our winter

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  9. Great feeling of awakening colour in this lovely haiku.

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    1. You caught that Gemma, thank you !

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  10. What a nice reminder of the beauty of spring's return.

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    1. I thought it was here but not after last night, spring is teasing us.

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  11. Now this is a return we are longing for at the moment... at least here where I live!

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    1. I keep saying soon Wabi, with a sigh

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  12. At least after a long cold winter nature's blooming again and spring has returns.

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    1. We do relish in life Kristjaan, it keeps us moving :)

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    1. ooo Michelle, I saw one last weekend and so the haiku. I hope he's not lost in the blizzard

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  14. Thank you payal, et Becca, and o yes, kinda sorta Amrit

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