You leave your window openwishing me to follow
though I wonder
which path thru the hollow.
My love, send me a note
where I might find you
or do you plead I follow
your heartbeats true.
Now, I hear you love
thru glade and over dale
to be with you once more
I shall not fail.
Written while looking out the open window at Magpie Tales. View other ponderous tales here.
Beautiful images of what might lie beyond the open window... to find the love I will not fail.
ReplyDeleteNice write.
lovely poem-lyrical and romantic
ReplyDeleterun quick and follow those heartbeats...smiles. nice magpie!
ReplyDeleteA pretty piece...sonnet-like.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Giovanni,,,sonnet-like. Takes me back to castles and maidens in towers longing to take the hand and follow the dream.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful words as always, well done !
Lovely Cheryl! Am I being a bit dark here or is the person in the poem wanting to follow their lover to the afterlife?
ReplyDeleteBeautiful words!!
Beautiful piece, with such a lovely classic feel.
ReplyDeletelovely romantic piece.. one could put it to tune! well said! :)
ReplyDeletemy magpie is ~here~
now that's love!
ReplyDeletelovely
Thank you Reflections, where there's a will there's a way ;)
ReplyDeleteLove is a song your heart sings kathew, sometimes off key but ever true.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Brian! Flying feets are better ;)
ReplyDeleteGiovanni, thanks for stopping by, I really like the lyrical aspect.
ReplyDeleteDanke Ms Magda, it practically wrote itself by The Pond ;)
ReplyDeleteummmm Dannnnnn, come to the bright side, hehehehe. Good to see you et merci :D
ReplyDeleteThank you willow, I like them short and sweet.
ReplyDeleteI'm going to try singing this Leo, hhmmm time to hand out the earplugs. I really enjoy your sites as well.
ReplyDeleteHi Rene, ain't love grand, it makes one ponder real good :D
ReplyDeleteI wanted to follow
ReplyDeleteAlice through the hollow.
It seemed ripe for adventure
with heartbeats true
and love to posture
my hope for you
nice verse and take on the prompt. Thanks for popping by my world as well.
Beuatiful Cheryl! As always:-)
ReplyDeleteI do like your verse too Kkrige.
ReplyDeleteMerci Rogue :)