Saturday, January 19, 2013

Dusk - Haiku




Wander through dusk at Haiku Heights

30 comments:

  1. this is beautiful haiku. Well done.

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  2. Winter's yin and yang" - wonderful last line!

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  3. A descriptive, emotive, magical haiku!

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  4. yin and yang - lovely images in your every word! Thanks for sharing.

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  5. I love the yin and yang of life Judy

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  6. Thank you Gemma, I'm a believer in magic

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  7. Wabi, many thanks for your comment

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  8. The silent moon moves in tandem with the balance of yin and yang. It is always there but may not be apparent! Nicely cheryl!

    Hank

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  9. You've written a beautiful haiku rising along the backdrop of a picturesque, night sky.

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  10. I like the way you say that. Nice one.

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  11. beautiful, creative! torn leaves against the back drop of rising moon!

    very nicely conceived!

    Perpetual Dusk

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  12. This is magical! You used words that are beautiful together.

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  13. so moving, your words carry me into the night with the leaves, moon and winter's cold breath!

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  14. what a beauty of emotions....of seasons and of mind...

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  15. I must confess that I did not know the meaning of haiku and had to look it up. It is always fun to learn about something new. Winter nights are quiet aren't they- no late evening song birds or mating insects- just the sound of your feet as they crunch on the snow.

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  16. I love the gentle expressive way you wrote this one... Great photo too.
    Eliz

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  17. This is a gorgeous, rich haiku full of dreamy images, I loved it x

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  18. MM, I shot the photograph at dusk and knew it was right for haiku

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  19. Thanks very much Hazel, it took me all of 4 minutes :)

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  20. It always surprises me how some leaves remain during our winter Xtine

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  21. Thank you debu, I'm a seasonal kinda scribbler ;)

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  22. Jennifer, that is exactly it! Nature is perfectly silent except when the ccccccold wind blows. I find haiku very relaxing, almost ooommmming to write.

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  23. Dusk is a gentle time of the day eof77. Thank you for popping by.

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  24. Why thank you HH, I happen to enjoy dreamy words :)

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