Sunday, December 08, 2013

Rivulet - Haiku



early morning mist
rivulets of dawns chilled breath
wakens naked skin



Follow the rivulets to Haiku Heights 


17 comments:

  1. a very different take on the prompt.

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  2. A stunning haiku for the senses. Nicely written!

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  3. Very nice!

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  4. "Dawns chilled breath" love this.

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  5. wakens naked skin
    dawns chilled breath price of living
    frog prince in a pond

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  6. wakens naked skin. A really good one.

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  7. Thank you all, this one came naturally maybe because of the poor frog prince now frozen in the pond. Thanks for the giggle one of a class ;)

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  8. Sadly it does...
    Yet beautifully!!!

    Please follow the link to read mine:
    http://locomente.blogspot.in/2013/12/promised-lifetime.html

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  9. Beautiful!

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  10. I like the chilly feeling in this one.

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  11. Chilly is the word today or as we say here "refreshing" :)

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  12. I love this, awaken the senses! Beautiful!

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  13. Thank you! SaFire, next time a warm one ;)

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