through
cedar hedge the setting sun sprays
yellow
beams that scatter upon snow
dry,
cold and bitter this day
while
birds peck and dig for substance
wearing
only their skin and feathers
that
causes me to ponder
how
they withstand this temperature
while
the flesh of this mere mortal
freezes
leaving skin blue
not
the blue of water or a summer sky
but
a transparent blue with veins
pulsating
in disagreement
of
my foolishness being outside
filling
the feeder to provide
nourishment
for those
who
can't provide for themselves
yet
complaints there are none
from
this soul as I hear
only
the soft thank yous of
gratitude
emitting from the hedge
sung
by chilled creatures
braver
than
I
This is most beautiful Cheryl. Your talent with words is equally enviable!
ReplyDeleteI try Barry :) I couldn't help but think of them in the bloody cold and needed a good ramble.
ReplyDeletethe first two lines instantly tickle me.
ReplyDeletethe sun spray beam on us on daily basis,
yet we must smile back to give love too.
exceptional poem.
Tickling a reader is a good thing Benji, thank you.
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I shall ponder
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