Tangerine
ribbons
tickle
sleeping sun to wake,
refreshing
citrus
tiger
eyes of dawn
open
in violet haze,
sun
salutations
crumpled
paper clouds
float
over the morning sky,
plane
trails leave their script
The past
few mornings the sky has been delicious and thought provoking
until “they” enter asking for this and that. I remain focused on
the view until the “hello! Cheryl ! Earth to Cheryl!" chant shatters my peace then work
begins ~sigh~ At least I have that moment in time.
Love this .....
ReplyDeleteThank you Michelle. My second floor office overlooks the river and I tell ya I can get quite led astray with the sunrises.
DeleteVery nice Haiku Cheryl
ReplyDeleteThank you very much John, gotta luv the morns.
DeleteSunrises closer to April and May become gorgeous here (if I can catch them!) .. winter is here for many more weeks so it is hard on garden fanatics .. we have to day dream a lot everyday to get through it !
ReplyDeleteLoved the Haiku girl .. I actually put orange essence in my kitchen clean up water to make the kitchen smell wonderful and citrusy ?? haha
Joy
So true Joy about the many more weeks, wannhhh, this incessant ccccold is wearing on me so I'll buck up and shout our war cry Je Suis Canadien eh.
DeleteThank you for citrusy comment, ya got it ;)
I am not normally a fan of Haiku with its tight regulation but your three pieces are excellent. They each convey strong morning images to me laced with the response of the onlooker - namely yourself.
ReplyDeleteThank you for visiting Yorkie. I'm either a rambler or a Haikuer, go figure. I enjoy the regs of haiku and find peace in visualizing and counting the syllables with me fingers. It's very calming.
DeleteFor me I just need to look around and do my best at describing what I see, feel, and hear and you have picked up on that, thank you again.
a refreshing piece, well done imagery.
ReplyDeleteThank you Benji, refreshing as the view was :)
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