Saturday, July 11, 2009

Following you, following me

Following you, following me
thru long grass we run
leaving down trodden paths
so we may never lose each other

Following me, following you
hearts beating as one
as our lives intertwine
with each other

Following you, following me
your sky, my sky
azure blue et brilliant sun
warming each other

Following me, following you
darkness twinkles her lights
illuminating our sky
shining on each other

Following you, following me
forever and a day
there is peace within our souls
knowing we are each other

7 comments:

  1. Beautiful!

    You know, this could have so many different symbolisms ... makes it very interesting. I might have to read again :-)

    BIG hello and a smile from Speedy in the new Hollydale

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  2. I was pondering about me love dere. So good to see youuuuuu :) Cheryl

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  3. Well, I must say; that was quite yummy! :-)

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  4. To me, this reads like a perfect union and ‘love story’. Very romantic :)

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  5. Rogue, bonnie appetitie :O

    Thanks so much Cath, it tis :)

    Cheryl

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  6. The synchronicity of words, images and feelings is very nice in this piece. The flavor of the poem is sweet, appreciative and rich. Really love it.

    ananji

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  7. Thank you so much Ananji. The title stayed with me all day and when I finally sat the words followed :) Cheryl

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